The best Halloween I've ever had was when I was in grade 4 (3 years ago). I was dressed up as a phantom and was so excited to go trick or treating. So my parents and I left the house, we started to do trick or treating.
Most of the houses were decorated very nicely with ghosts, graveyards and skeletons. The streets were full with lots of children wearing different kind of costumes, which was creepy. It looked like everyone is having a very good time and going around with bags to collect candies. I was going to every single house on the street where I live and every house gave me at least four pieces of candy. The owners of the houses always asked me questions and I never got tired of it because when I was trick or treating back then, the more I talked the more candy I got. That is why, the Halloween was awesome. Every house I went to, I always tried to start a conversation, then the owners of the house got distracted and put more candies in my bag. By the time my parents and I stopped trick or treating, I had about 3 bags full of candies.
This was the best Halloween I've ever had. I got more candy than I ever did in the previous years and I had a great time.
By: Adam M
This blog was really funny. Personally, I think you can cross the line when it comes to getting candy. This blog did not only make me laugh, but it was really fun to read.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote this blog. It seemed very funny and it also seemed as if you were talking to a person. I started laughing when you said that you tried to start a conversation just so you could have more candy. I think it was a wonderful blog
ReplyDeleteGreat blog Adam!I found your blog very elegant. You should a lot of detail in your blog. And i bet you had loads of fun eating those three bags of candy!
ReplyDeleteGio.F
That was a really funny story and it was a very amusing, interesting story. It's so true the more you talk the more candy you'll get and it's true what they say keep your friends close and your enemies closer.(but in this case your strangers closer.) really good blog! -dani
ReplyDeleteWOW, That was really funny! I can't believe you tried starting conversations to get more candy. That is what made me laugh!It was a good piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteAWESOME JOB!
-tiff.h
Very good blog Adam (: It was smooth and detailed, but also very funny. Full of humor, like you. I sure hope you didn't eat all that candy in one night, otherwise you wouldv'e gone mad crazy. Great job, and keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete-Christine
Your blog was very funny! I like how you include humor into your writing. I really enjoyed this blog and anyone that reads will too. It was detailed and descriptive. This blog made me laugh, it was interesting and entertaining to read. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing
Christina Z
That was an interesting blog to say the least Adam. I probably would have had to go to every house about 4 times to get that much candy. I might try out just talking and talking and talking to get candy during Halloween. But then again I would have lots of sugar rushes, gain lots of weight and break my no cavity streak.
ReplyDeleteThis is really funny!!! I like how you talk to the owner to get more candy! I can' believe that you have 3 bags of candy! if I have that much candy I will be hyper everyday! nice writing really love it!
ReplyDeleteKyra Y.