My Best Halloween
My best Halloween was a couple of years ago. I went with Ryan A his brother and Dylan K. We had a fun night we wondered all over our neighbourhood we got so much candy but the best part was that we went to Laurens grandma's house and when we got to the door there was a giant smoke cloud that came out of nowhere, we all ran away from her house and a skeleton came down from the tree and then Dylan fell while we were running. We came back after a couple of houses and we got a big chocolate bar, I can still taste the yummy crunch bar that she gave. We also went to a another house not too far from where I live and it was very cool because they had this smoke machine and throughout the house you could see lighting and hear thunder. That's why that was my favourite Halloween ever!
Gio F.
Nice detail, and that sounded like a fun time! Great description of that halloween night, but I felt more emotion could be added into it somehow. Awesome job though! (:
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I would say that Lauren's house was probably the scariest house on the block. My favorite kind of chocolate bar is KitKat but I think Crunch that crunch is also a good candy bar. Great blog Gio
ReplyDeleteThat must have been an awesome Halloween! This Halloween, I'm going to go to Lauren's grandma's house since you got a big chocolate bar last time. The way you described the chocolate bar made me want to eat it. Great description and great blog!
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