WORST HALLOWEEN EVER!
This all happened on October 31st. It was Halloween night. I went to my cousin's house for Halloween for the first time and will be my last. So we all go out trick or treating. We got loads of candies and chocolate bars and even some pop! So when we got home we ate some of our candy. Then we went to bed.
The next morning I had to go home. So I said bye and gave everyone a hug. On the way home I realize I had left my candy bag at my cousin's. I was angry, but what made me even more angry was they ate ALL MY CANDY!
So that was the worst Halloween ever.
By: Josh J
Awwww that's sad maybe next time it won't happen !
ReplyDeleteTHAT WAS A VVERY GOOD STORY! Although I DO THINK that you could have put more detail and decscription into your story. It must've really sucked when you got all those candies then found out your cousins ate them all! It was a very good story and I enjoyed reading it! Good job! :D
ReplyDelete-DANI
That was not the nicest thing your cousin did but you at least you got some of your candy. A great blog but I think you should have added a bit more to it
ReplyDeleteThat same thing happened,my brothers stole all my candy when i was away. Now I hide mine in my closet so they will not find it,so far it is working out pretty good. By the way the blog was great!
ReplyDeleteThat was pretty inconsiderate of your cousins to do that. They could of least saved it for you.. Anyway, I agree with the other comments above saying that you could have added more detail and feeling. Good Job though!
ReplyDelete-Christine
That's pretty mean of your cousins. That's like fifty dollars worth of candy gone in the garbage. You could have added more details and feelings in it but it was still a great blog.
ReplyDelete-Adam