My Thanksgiving Poem
Thanksgiving is a time to be loving,
Like giving a kiss, or just plain old hugging.
It's like showing a smile,
But it only lasts for a while.
Thanksgiving is a time for parties,
It's not a day of fun.
You give to others, food, like maybe Smarties,
Or a father giving love to his son.
Thanksgiving is a day to come together,
Like friends, neighbors, or your family.
Giving love to someone lasts with them forever.
It makes yourself live your life happily.
Thanksgiving is a day from god.
You show to him you can give,
Not like taking life on a fisher rod.
God gave us a life to enjoy and live.
Thanksgiving is a day to love others,
Like how God loves each of his children.
We give love to our fathers and mothers,
That taught us to obey and listen.
I totally agree with you thanksgiving is a special day. I like how you rhymed parties with smarties. It was a very clever rhyme and I do not think I could have thought of it. Good poem Jodie!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome! GReat Job! You were able to explain thanksgiving in a nice and kind way. Your rhythm was good. I loved reading your poem. Good Job Jodie!
ReplyDeleteI agree with sean about the ryhme with smarties. It is a word I would probably would not even think of using. I do think it was kind of odd how you started with the first 2 lines ryhming and then the first and third the rest of the poem, but I think it was more creative that way. It was a good poem and a great blog Jodie!
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