It all started Halloween 08, I was super hyped because I hardly had ever see my cousin and he was comming with me trick-or-treating. I had on a ice princess costume with glittery cape and frosty hair. Since I was hyped I decided to call him early to bring some exta bags just in case, and somehow my mom convinced me not to. So next half an hour I waited untill I had the neve to call him, and again, and again , but he never picked up!
I guess after that it got a little blury ,if you know what i mean. My parents tried to re-assure me but nothing worked so, instead my dad got some eggs and started throwing them at hte nieghbours (I have an awesome dad) ! A little after that I felt better and nobody really came to our house so i kept basically all the candy !
I guess it wasn't that bad of a Halloween afterall, but to me was the worst. So you've heard the story now, thanks for reading !
By : Lauren B.
No offence but you need to try and be more careful about spelling mistakes. I do think the halloween wasn't that bad, but thats my opinion. It was a very good blog and I had a pleasure reading it.
ReplyDeleteWOW! that was so awesome, I love how your parents are okay with you throwing egss at your neighbours house. Sounds like a lot of fun. I wish that you would have included more detail about why and how everything got blurry, but it was still awesome A+!!!
ReplyDelete-dani
That was a good start. But you have to be careful about the spelling mistakes.And I had fun reading your story, my favorite part was when you parent let you throw eggs at your neighbours house i think it was funny. And I think you should put more details.
ReplyDeleteThat was a funny story you got there. You must have an awesome dad, throwing those eggs at other people. Also sad that you didn't get to talk to your cousin. You should add more stuff to your story. And put a little more detail. Good story Lauren!
ReplyDeleteThat was very interesting, you must have really enjoyed all the candy you got. There was quite a few mistakes,but i still understood what you were trying to say.Good job!
ReplyDelete-Tiff
Only a few minor spelling mistakes but that is okay! That halloween sounded fun, and if that was your worst, then i'd love to hear your best! And what fun parents you must have! Very insteresting too. (:
ReplyDelete-Christine
once again the story/blog was very good but you need to edit a bit more often. Other than that a great blog. My favorite part was the egg throwing!
ReplyDeleteThis was really entertaining! I can't believe your dad threw eggs at your neighbour's house. I agree, you do have an awesome dad. There were some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't that bad. I thought that this blog was really enjoyable.
ReplyDelete-Adam