It's a dark night and the wind blows
You feel somebody is there
Your a little frighten and nobody knows
What if something happed no one would hear
I'm getting curious to get home
I don't think i'm going to make the night
I'm probably all alone
There's not a person in sight
In a couple more minutes i'm going to cry
Now i'm thinking about what i'm sorry for
Anyone just please walk by
I'll do anything to get out of here and more
I think i'm going to break down
Wait I see a glimmer of light
Now I have an up side down frown
I start running with all my might
I open the door to what do I find
All my friend's an family waiting for me
I'm here now wanting me and my family to bind
Did you get here fine , I said yeah it was a cup of tea
HAPPY HALLOWEEN :)
- LAUREN
Nice poem Lauren! I like it in the first stanza when you say "The wind blows, you feel like somebody is there" It send shivers down my spine because I think about when your home alone and the littlest noise make you jump and gets your heart racing. Plus you state a true fact, if something happens when your alone, no one would hear...
ReplyDeleteWow that was great! In the first paragraph I was getting goosebumps. I was thinking oh my what is going to happen next. Then you said that ther was a bright light and I thought good everything is going to be fine. When you got home safe your family asked if you got there fine, you lied and said "it was a cup of tea." That is probably what I would of said to. Anyway that was a great blog.
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