How My Life Relates To Jimmy
I can relate to Jimmy because at my old school I wanted to go to a friend's house. I couldn't go because I had a hockey game. I was eight years old then and I was angry like Jimmy when my mom told me I couldn't go. In that same week, I felt better when I went to my friend's house. That's because I didn't have a hockey or soccer game.
I think it was a great blog anonymous person! I think it could be improved because it looked like you used a bigger font to make it look longer. I think you could relate more to Jimmy and related more to the story. It still was a good blog and a great job. Just remember to put your name!
ReplyDeleteGood relating in your blog! I agree with Caroline while saying you should put a bit more work in your blog next time. Sometimes I like short and sweet though but a more moderate amount of writing would be better
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